Narrative opening using "show don't tell".
Here are My examples:
Lydia's face turned red as she walks and looks up to see the orange flame from her house.
In the middle of nowhere two girls were running as they look back to see the hideous hairy creature.
Tom's face suddenly turned red as he looks down and walks home carrying a box of items from his workplace.
Clair stopped and the crowd flooded to her as her face became puffy and red.
Julie sat down in tears while seeing his boyfriend walk away from her.
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